Friday, February 15, 2013

[55 Fiction] Black girl in the Ring

Her ancestors were Black too; her squarish-face and color resembled them almost entirely.

Men swarmed her - loners that needed company, details, why even porn. Sometimes even women, and they paid her comfortably.

She wound up by the night and slept by herself. Her owner called it “Shutdown”.

"Journal of a machine at an Internet Cafe".


13 comments:

  1. What a novel story for a 55 Fiction! Liked it! :)

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  2. I think you have the beginning of a kick-ass novel there!

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  4. thank you SJ! Appreciate your nomination and feels to warm to be awarded!!

    @Jaysh - haha! :)

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  5. hahahha what an ending :D couldnt guess in first 2 lines superb!

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  6. Hey that was really good. I was wondering what it could be :-)

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  7. hey thankkk you ramya!

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  8. Beautiful twist, made me read the story twice.

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  9. He he I was ready to come up with a feminist comment but then I read the last line...
    :)

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