Friday, February 15, 2013

[55 Fiction] Black girl in the Ring

Her ancestors were Black too; her squarish-face and color resembled them almost entirely.

Men swarmed her - loners that needed company, details, why even porn. Sometimes even women, and they paid her comfortably.

She wound up by the night and slept by herself. Her owner called it “Shutdown”.

"Journal of a machine at an Internet Cafe".


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12 comments:

  1. Shilpa Garg2/15/13, 12:22 PM

    What a novel story for a 55 Fiction! Liked it! :)

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  2. Talitha2/15/13, 2:36 PM

    I think you have the beginning of a kick-ass novel there!

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  3. Kappu2/17/13, 8:41 AM

    haha thanks talitha

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  4. Kappu2/17/13, 8:42 AM

    thank you shilpa!

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  5. Sherna Jay2/17/13, 11:09 AM

    Hello There,

    I hereby nominate your blog for the Liebster award.
    Congratulations !!!
    Come to my site and you will know what to do


    http://meowconnect.blogspot.in/2013/02/liebster-award.html


    - Snuffles Jay

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  6. Jayashree Srivatsan2/17/13, 7:35 PM

    Wow! What a twist !

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  7. Kappu2/17/13, 9:10 PM

    thank you SJ! Appreciate your nomination and feels to warm to be awarded!!

    @Jaysh - haha! :)

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  8. Ramya2/20/13, 3:44 PM

    hahahha what an ending :D couldnt guess in first 2 lines superb!

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  9. Kappu2/20/13, 10:54 PM

    hey thankkk you ramya!

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  10. Kappu2/27/13, 11:34 PM

    haha, thanks Ash!

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  11. Easwar Arumugam3/2/13, 10:03 PM

    Beautiful twist, made me read the story twice.

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  12. asteria's canvass3/8/13, 9:42 PM

    He he I was ready to come up with a feminist comment but then I read the last line...
    :)

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