Sunday, July 1, 2012

Two Minutes


This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 29; the 29th Edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The topic for this month is 'TWO MINUTES'.

Ryan and Derek worked together planning the bank robbery.

The safe was accessible only for two minutes.With welling beads of perspiration they dodged the Infrared sensors, killed the guards and neared the safe. “Access denied. Call #111” a screen flashed. 

Derek started punching the numbers. 

“Derek, whom are you calling???? Game-over bro!!”, Ryan blinked... 

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34 comments:

  1. Diwakar Narayan7/1/12, 3:50 AM

    There is nothing to comment but a :-)

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  2. TTT7/1/12, 7:58 AM

    good one kappu... and good luck for BAT

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    1. Kappu7/1/12, 11:46 AM

      Thanks Tangy Tom! Your story on Aashita was brilliant!

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  3. Ash7/1/12, 11:55 AM

    Short and sweet, all the best!

    Do stop by my blog sometime :) ..... M * U * S * I * N * G * S

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    1. Kappu7/1/12, 12:08 PM

      Thanks Ash, appreciate you stopping by!

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  4. C Suresh7/1/12, 4:20 PM

    Mmm! Surprise ending:) U certainly surprised me

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  5. Shashiprakash Saini7/1/12, 5:58 PM

    good one

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  6. aativas7/1/12, 6:03 PM

    Good one .. It is difficult to tell so much in very few words.

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    1. Kappu7/1/12, 10:00 PM

      Thanks aativas! Nice to get a comment from a veteran writer!

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  7. CRD7/1/12, 9:12 PM

    That was pretty short. You could have elaborated to pile on the suspense...nevertheless a good effort :)

    ATB for BAT :)

    Cheers
    CRD

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    1. Kappu7/1/12, 9:29 PM

      Thanks CRD, it was 55 fiction, I had to limit it to 55 words :(

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  8. Unknown7/2/12, 12:13 AM

    :) very nice...as pointed out by Ash...short and sweet

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    1. Kappu7/2/12, 9:00 AM

      Thanks girl! Loved your one about the drivers at a signal!

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    2. Unknown7/10/12, 9:30 AM

      Kappu.. you have been tagged in my latest post. Check it here

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    3. Kappu7/16/12, 12:31 PM

      Hey thanks, i am checking my blog after quite a hiatus! will check out... :)

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  9. O'S7/2/12, 1:38 AM

    As we Amdavadis say, suppak chhe! Will have to try 55 some day. It is easy to go on and on with an idea, very difficult to compress it all down. Great read!

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    1. Kappu7/2/12, 9:01 AM

      "suppak chhe!" sounds cool! ;) and thanks Sandy! You should try it out!

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  10. Someone is Special7/2/12, 2:11 AM

    "Game over bro" I loved the way you surprised me.. Great 55.. Keep writing..

    Someone is Special

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  11. deeps7/2/12, 12:52 PM

    Wait a minute… the game really is over?
    :P

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  12. Anonymous7/2/12, 6:56 PM

    Wow!! Superb ending!! Loved it :) ATB!!

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  13. JJ7/3/12, 3:57 PM

    I love 55 fiction. You can say so much in so little :D
    Nice one!

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  14. Unknown7/3/12, 4:03 PM

    Short post conveying so much. ATB

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  15. Panchali7/3/12, 7:19 PM

    That was a speedy one, Kappu. Great thriller...* u got me blinking* :D
    All the best...

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  16. Kappu7/4/12, 1:01 PM

    @JJ - Yeah, I adore it too! :)

    @Ash - Thank you Ash!

    @^ - Thank you Panchali, glad you liked it!

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  17. Richi Baidwan7/16/12, 1:16 AM

    Don't think I've seen a short post from you ever so I'm sorta surprised. A rather literal take on the topic may I ask?

    Reminds me of the MJ song Thriller ;)

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  18. Kappu7/16/12, 12:28 PM

    @richi - I always look forward to your comments! ;)

    literal take on the topic? may be yes! :D

    and thank you!!

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  19. Sridevi 19749/20/12, 6:09 PM

    Ha Ha ...a little bit of Archer and O'Henry all rolled into this brilliant little piece ...A big "Thumbs up" from me :)

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  20. Kappu9/21/12, 10:57 PM

    That you srii!! :)

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