Buried
She cried bitterly – she wanted to live. They just wouldn’t hear her out! She was shut in the dark – the reassuring warmth around her suddenly turned repellent. She screamed and screamed.
Exulting her last breath in the t(w)omb; she kissed adieu to her faceless killers.Her crime? – to be the girl foetus :-<
She cried bitterly – she wanted to live. They just wouldn’t hear her out! She was shut in the dark – the reassuring warmth around her suddenly turned repellent. She screamed and screamed.
Exulting her last breath in the t(w)omb; she kissed adieu to her faceless killers.Her crime? – to be the girl foetus :-<
I liked them...esp the first and last. The 2nd was a bit too vague for me to get to its intended depth.
ReplyDeleteNice blog ! :)
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Thank you for the lovely comments Fatima! am glad you liked it!
ReplyDeleteand yes, even my friends had the same say on FFF no 2 :) What I attempted was to trick the people into thinking the hero is a police officer, when the hero is a police-trained-dog! Have I succeeded? I wonder! ;)
Liked the first and last ones!!
ReplyDeleteA suggestion... it would be nice if you post each of the three 55 Fictions in 3 different posts... reading one after the other does not give due time to soak and absorb each one as all the three are in a different genre! :)